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☆ ナイトメア ~ Ruka X Yomi ≠ "pincushion in training" FLASHBACK = "true love never lasts"

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Title: True Love Never Lasts (pincushion in training)
Band: Nightmare
Pairing: Ruka X Yomi (Ruka X Hitsugi)
Chapter: epilogue
Rating: NC-17
Genre: drama, angst




Epilogue

『 2008 - 01 - 13 currently being revised』



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Epilogue.... Not really satisfied with it but if I try to express Ruka`s feelings any more I`ll just break down and cry because I`m awefully emotional recently , thinking about ex-lovers and stuff... meh (;_;)
I guess you can guess how he`s feeling anyway, if not, you`re heartless!! (>O<)




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On 29th April 2007 23:04 (UTC), [info]sunshiver commented:
great emotional descriptions, i love it <3
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On 29th April 2007 23:10 (UTC), [info]sho_ji replied:
I would`ve loved to write their feelings more precisely but I just couldn`t make it sound right ~

breakups are so terrible (ToT)

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On 2nd May 2007 11:36 (UTC), [info]duo_simulacra commented:
Oh, if only it didn't end so sadly...
Beautifully written though, especially this last chapter; I think you wrote Ruka's feelings very, very well. I certainly know I've felt that way before.
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On 17th August 2007 21:01 (UTC), [info]sho_ji replied:
sorry for the late reply~

I`m actually not satisfied with this end.
I wanted to express Ruka`s feeling more, but I failed miserably.

I`ll revise all my fics soon and repost them and maybe even post them at the approriate communities.

I`m currently finishing the last stories of my "nightmare-saga" including a one shot with Ruka and Kei from Baroque/Kanivallism set just after this breakup.
Yes, I tend to exploit these feelings of despair for my own amusement XD

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On 24th December 2007 22:21 (UTC), [info]govi_chan commented:
this was great story... trought reading i was touched and almost started cry..it was really emotional and you wrote Ruka's feeling of sorrow really beatifully... but this ending let's some questions unanswer...like what happend to ruka and yomi then, yomi and hitsugi, or hitsugi and ruka [i'm such baaad persone..i want to know everything]... but it was very great story and actuly very real..
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On 24th December 2007 22:41 (UTC), [info]sho_okii replied:
thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed it X3

Well, the thing is, I started this story as a story about Ruka and Hitsugi/Hitsugi anmd Yomi, but while writing that I realised that I need to explain the relationship between Ruka and Yomi first so the happenings between Ruka and Hitsugi and the reasons behind Ruka`s actions come clear, so I wrote this bit about Ruka and Yomi...

wait, i`m getting myself confused now...|D

So, well, I ahd an awful writers block for about a year and I`ve only just started writing again about a month ago and I`m currently working on the last chapters to the original Ruka/Hitsugi story, so if you just bear with me a bit longer, it`ll all clear up...

though if you want to know what happens relationship-wise, I can spoiler you...

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On 24th December 2007 22:58 (UTC), [info]govi_chan replied:
congrats to overcoming your write-block x)

aaaaaaaa, I will be patiently waiting for next chapters, so dont worry x) aaah, im really happy that you actually will write more chapters to this story x)

[btw.. merii kurisumasu x3]

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On 24th December 2007 23:10 (UTC), [info]sho_okii replied:
well, not really to THIS story in particular...

It`s sorta difficult to explain.

The RukaYomi relationship story is finished with this, but the following stories are all in the same universe, so they do belong together.

I also have a couple of Ruka-based oneshots which go to this series and maybe I`ll write a sequel afterwards XD ONCE I`ve finished the actual series

And merry christmas back, even though I myself don`t celebrate XD
Nice to know I`m not the only one spending christmas infront of the comp

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On 25th December 2007 00:00 (UTC), [info]govi_chan replied:
ah, now i understand XD

well i read one fanfiction series...well it was named like saga...because it was like fanfic which interpretet like fifteen years of one band x)

i look forward to this oneshots and sequels x3

oh, actually, i dont celebrate too...its just another day in year tought people give presents to each other x) and im in front of the comp cause it like one in the morning and i slept in the afternoon xD

[im sooo talkative at nights XD]

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On 25th December 2007 00:04 (UTC), [info]sho_okii replied:
well, I`m a night person and I go to sleep around 3-5 a.m. usually so I`m usually online then when i`ve got a computer and internet around

I slept really long today though, until 5 p.m.

Damn, now you`ve got me really wanting to go on writing right now!

It`s a pity you read this now though because I wanted to revise the entire series and change some things and repost during january (T_T)

may I aks how you came to find this fic btw?

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On 25th December 2007 00:10 (UTC), [info]govi_chan replied:
ah x) its okey you really can x) i like to read some really good fic more like one time x)

dont know... i think my sister save your LJ on our favourites and today i was broed and was cleaning and ordering sites and tehre it was x) and i liek RUKA x hitsu pairing so i started reading xp

[btw...dont you have ICQ?..cause i think writing there would be more confortabel and so on.. x)]

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On 25th December 2007 00:21 (UTC), [info]sho_okii replied:
I only have MSN

visualkiss@hotmail.de

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On 25th December 2007 00:30 (UTC), [info]govi_chan replied:
oookey so MSN...i will dwnl it x)
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